This week's Sunday Scribblings prompt is crush.
Winter eyes pierced mine —
Cheeks flushed rose, my heart ran wild.
Then he kissed my friend.
Note: I chose to write a haiku to see if I could capture the "ouch" of a crushed crush in just a few words. My last few posts have been prose, so I also wanted to try something different.
For more takes on "crush," check out this week's Sunday Scribblings.
Ah, wonderful. It pierced my heart, perfectly captured.
Posted by: Waspgoddess | February 18, 2007 at 07:46 AM
Such agony, well captured!
Posted by: Paris Parfait | February 18, 2007 at 01:11 PM
You have done so well in so few words. You have captured it. No doubt
Posted by: gautami | February 19, 2007 at 09:12 AM
lol.
Very good.
Posted by: Inconsequential | February 19, 2007 at 04:43 PM
Ouch...been there. *sigh*
Yep, that encapsulates it perfectly. Gotta love the emotional force of a good haiku!
Posted by: Mardougrrl | February 19, 2007 at 05:24 PM