Crushed

This week's Sunday Scribblings prompt is crush.

Winter eyes pierced mine —€”
Cheeks flushed rose, my heart ran wild.
Then he kissed my friend.

Note: I chose to write a haiku to see if I could capture the "ouch" of a crushed crush in just a few words. My last few posts have been prose, so I also wanted to try something different.

For more takes on "crush," check out this week's Sunday Scribblings.

Comments

[Waspgoddess]

Ah, wonderful. It pierced my heart, perfectly captured.

[Paris Parfait]

Such agony, well captured!

[gautami]

You have done so well in so few words. You have captured it. No doubt

[Inconsequential]

lol.

Very good.

[Mardougrrl]

Ouch...been there. *sigh*

Yep, that encapsulates it perfectly. Gotta love the emotional force of a good haiku!